monolouge comments

Overall my strengths were that I moved around a lot and had good blocking, this helped me to get into the character. This also helped to show the character's age and some other traits. A weakness was that in the end I could have bragged more about being brave around the ghost. In addition I missed a line so I could work on memorization. Something that I could improve would be to pause more between each sentence. A part that I could change is to add blocking when I say, "something real creepy like."